Really good.
I have the say the animation is really well done, and I love the style and skeme that you have developed with this whole episode. The way that you are showing the whole town is fantastic.
The thing I see it do. It must be a minute or two too short. For the only thing that happens he gets up, wakes up his brother, has breaky with his father/grandfather and simply goes to school... there is no real point or development in the storyline apart that it is his first day to school and that he is going to be hooked on maybe martial training?
I can see where you want to get into this but the story must have a introduction, problem, solution, end. where this I can only see a introduction and no real reason for me to come back, just curiosity to see how your skills develope and for a real comming back of one of my favorite flashes: 1 - The Story of Khale. Anyways, really good! I hope that my criticism could be constructive for you, and I gotta say hey! I wish I could do what you are doing!