I laughed and it was funny!
However!!! I went to youtube to see the original comedy stand up. Its much much much funnier to see the guys body language. The cartoon was very well done and I loved the effects you added to it like the paper... But next time you should work on having your own audio and story :)
I watched it twice in a row!
You might as well do a flash animation with only fucking bulls and strip all the cows with only two tits. I assume that the 3D glass bull is bisexual lol.
Holy f*cking cow this IS the longest cartoon ever? But its hilarious how you guys made this cartoon, all characters wear masks so you dont see them talk or anything, just move their heads lol. I like how they are medals to see this animation 3 times in a row? :o So did you guys make this to break the record of the longest cartoon ever on newgrounds or something?
I will give you a tiny little hint!
Spoiler? The director could be his father! :o
He has the same black eye rings
Anyways, I love the dickness of the guy, I Love watchings these episodes.
I love your flash animations
I laughed very very hard at that last minute! and I really thought that it was going to happen! :D
Some of them was ok
But the Sleeping beauty one... was freaking funny as hell.
What a great ripoff! You could have used his style, but its the same I have already seen, but worse, and very expected. Ego raptor uses a more strong random comedy, but what makes his flashes shines, its how the whole flash developes very fast, and how fast he speaks. He is very good voice actor,... while you... are trying too hard to copy and paste using Metal Gear Solid 4 for with very very unnecessary spoilers. Thank god I have already played and passed the game, but the spoilers just just too much.
You have great talent man, use it to make something NEW
I am sorry but, the whole point of the animation, what is it? I thought it would be the kind of thing that would only be in a gallery displaying in a monitor... and I... was right! I always read the info of the flash before I review.
To improve this,,, I am sure you had a deadline or other things to do, but You could have made the whole experience more engaging, mind sucking. At least make the user interested to see it longer than 30 seconds... You should have added something that the user would make him happy to see, laugh to see, scared to see, or curious to see,,, (or something) instead placing a monkey that makes a couple of emotions and moves pieces of gallery. The slow bit is good for GALLERY purposes... but making it slightly faster wount'nt hurt anyone either!
I was eating you know? I nearly spew!
I have the say the animation is really well done, and I love the style and skeme that you have developed with this whole episode. The way that you are showing the whole town is fantastic.
The thing I see it do. It must be a minute or two too short. For the only thing that happens he gets up, wakes up his brother, has breaky with his father/grandfather and simply goes to school... there is no real point or development in the storyline apart that it is his first day to school and that he is going to be hooked on maybe martial training?
I can see where you want to get into this but the story must have a introduction, problem, solution, end. where this I can only see a introduction and no real reason for me to come back, just curiosity to see how your skills develope and for a real comming back of one of my favorite flashes: 1 - The Story of Khale. Anyways, really good! I hope that my criticism could be constructive for you, and I gotta say hey! I wish I could do what you are doing!
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